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~On top of the world

C1d1cy

Published: Jan 2, 2014

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oUo

My eyes are watering

im sorry im proud of maself furr once

fffffffff

PLEASE

NOW THIS ONE

YOU HAVE TO CRITIQUE FFS

ITS.. OMF

no jokes

my last animation was some sketchy red thing jumping or leaping i cant even remember, But this beauti-omf oUo

//squeel

im gonna die soon

im just

gonna die

LOOK AT IT OMFG

please critique oUo

I'll luff yew all if yew do

Ahh thats a lie, ill just be real greatful

Also, should I do a background?

If so i would TOTALLY set it on the weather outside//peeks out window

hmm no i wont its raining

LOL

GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH//cries

art is by me and my cuzz *Dannyowl

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hellsapothecary

Jan 2, 2014

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^{weelll I don't think there's anything that wrong with it, just the tail, which does get a little shorter in the frames. I did notice the chin gets a little bigger in one frame, but that might just be me. The wings are spectacular for your first time. HUrrmm also the the legs look a little off too, but I can't explain it.. I wont say anything about how he goes up and down, because actually that's what happens owo. Oohh and I don't know if you meant to do this, but you only see the ear once in the whole animation.. :I So uh yeah!
Overall this is amazing. I really like it :3 Good job Dylan <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/>}